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Take Me Home by ~johnflaherty:iconjohnflaherty:

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She was the one who gave me this scar
A wound I been carryin' in my heart
It never healed ever since she left me
Now I got to find some soothing peace!

Take me home...
Away from her evil thing!
Take me home...
Back to my own peace!
Take me home...
Where I can feel safe
And so far away
From her mad eyes!

She said "I will always love you,
No matter what, no matter who..."
Now I know it was all lies
But that won't gimme any peace at night!

Take me home...
Where I can cry all alone!
Take me home...
Can't take it anymore!
Take me home...
It's all I have now
After she broke my heart
And stole my very soul!

Woow, hey-yeah!!

She was the one who gave me this scar
It been so long, but I feel she's not too far
The scent of her perfume is hard to forget
It's a sign that tells me, I'm still her target!

Take me home...
Won't you ever leave me 'lone?
Take me home...
My freedom is long gone!
Take me home...
Can't get too far
She won't let me die
And finally get some peace!

Take me home...
Take me home...
Take me home...
Take me home...
©2005-2009 ~johnflaherty
:iconjohnflaherty:

Author's Comments

Finally! I wrote somethin'! :)

It might be added to my "album", *It All Starts Here*

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:icondonryu:
~Donryu Feb 10, 2005, 2:07:58 PM
I really like it...Wish I could hear it with music.

--
Part of "I Just Wanna Live" by Good Charlotte
I rock a Lawsuit when I'm going to court A white suit when I'm gettin' divorced A black suit at the funeral home And my birthday suit when I'm home alone Talkin' on the phone Got an interview with the
:iconjohnflaherty:
~johnflaherty Feb 10, 2005, 3:04:05 PM
Me, too. ^^;

Actually, when I was thinkin' of a song to write, I began to hum drums, guitars and bass riffs I could remember at the time. Last night, I actually had two or three songs, but I forgot any lyrics I came up with last night... ^^;

--
"Am I missing an eyebrow?"
-Adam Savage, "Mythbusters"

"I wanna have my kicks before the whole shit-house goes up in flames..."
-Jim Morrison

"It's funny how most people love the dead, once you're dead you're made for life."
-Jimi Hendrix
:icondonryu:
~Donryu Feb 10, 2005, 4:57:17 PM
oh, you should keep up the thinking you did a good job.

--
Part of "I Just Wanna Live" by Good Charlotte
I rock a Lawsuit when I'm going to court A white suit when I'm gettin' divorced A black suit at the funeral home And my birthday suit when I'm home alone Talkin' on the phone Got an interview with the
:iconjohnflaherty:
~johnflaherty Feb 10, 2005, 6:46:24 PM
Really? Thanks very much!

--
"Am I missing an eyebrow?"
-Adam Savage, "Mythbusters"

"I wanna have my kicks before the whole shit-house goes up in flames..."
-Jim Morrison

"It's funny how most people love the dead, once you're dead you're made for life."
-Jimi Hendrix
:icondonryu:
~Donryu Feb 10, 2005, 7:26:29 PM
Yes...and Your welcome.

--
Part of "I Just Wanna Live" by Good Charlotte
I rock a Lawsuit when I'm going to court A white suit when I'm gettin' divorced A black suit at the funeral home And my birthday suit when I'm home alone Talkin' on the phone Got an interview with the
:icondjpirtu:
~djpirtu Nov 1, 2005, 4:54:57 AM
Well done melancholy never fails to impress me.
And I have to say, this thing is almost screaming to get some music to support it.

--
Melankoliasta: [link]
Member of ~Suomalaaset, ~JackClub
and the past ~lost-souls
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